I think this was by far the most fun and tough writing process I have gone through. It was fun to relive memories and relate them to larger concept and problems, but finding the right topic and how everything connects is very difficult. I believe I have a decent topic that can be used effectively but I am worried about how much of the story I tell. I think I might have told too much and explained the reasons behind it not effectively enough. I felt a little short on sources, but the ones that I did have are relevant and for the most part further my point. I found it difficult to not blabber on and talk forever on the topic. I almost think I went off topic a little bit with the MOW information.
I just need to think about my overall format and structure of the paper to see if everything flows the way I would like and if not, then change it. But I liked how it turned out and my original point was conveyed at the end. With the help of classmates next week and eventually the writing lab, I feel I can transform this paper into an even more effective paper.
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