I'm really having trouble thinking if a climax scene because there really is only one scene, just repeating each day with altered dialogue. I could go into more detail about the story in general and climax with the handshake at the end of the conversation, but i feel that it would really be drawing it out too much for a 1200 word paper. I could use the story of other families like on academy street with how grateful they are (but have contact with a lot of people), woman in apartment complex on hill, hoarder (creepy), and then climax at the point when I'm done with the route and the feeling of satisfaction comes over me.
At the time when i open the cooler and see myself take the last of the hot meal and soup out, retrieve the cold lunch from the cooling bag, i understand what i have just done. Not only have i delivered the sustenance required for two meals per day on the weekdays, but i have brightened up everyone on my route's day. I can confidently say this becuase of the smiles and friendly conversation we make, and not just for a second, but for the rest of their day. I believe this relates...then relate this to all elderly people living alone without the opportunity to have someone brighten their day or even just keep them company.
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