Reflection 1.2

After the conference with you, I felt somewhat confident about my paper and knew that I had to change some structural things as well as general rhetorical changes. I revised my 1.1 draft before Wednesday and met with a professor in the writing center, who read my paper out loud and made some corrections. These were generally small changes, but some major fails on my part were shown: such as i introduced ethos as the appeal on emotion, when the paragraph before that was on ethos. She tried to reduce the wording of some of my paragraphs and then I made those revisions for today. I feel very confident about my paper now. My writing process is very slow in the beginning as it always is with my writing, but I feel that I did not wait until the very last moment to make revisions. I feel that the writing center helped a lot and i plan on using that resource in the future. I do feel rather confident about future papers with the outcome of this one.