Friday, February 11, 2011

Reflection 1.1

I felt that my paper was a solid effort, that I did not rush it or just write it for the sake of writing it. I thought a lot about the prewriting process and felt that I had a good amount of detail in all aspects of the appeals and situation. The one thing that I lacked was actually using the terms (ethos, pathos, logos, as well as the situation terms and the ack and response). I covered most of the content, but they were lost in the paper when I did not bring attention to them.  Also my qutoes were "dropped" without proper introduction. I explained them after they were in the paper, but I need to bring them in and out. I need to not start or end paragraphs with quotes, because they will seem out of context and the reader will have a tough time following my logic. Two of my middle paragraphs lacked a logical order and I need to work on those in my final draft.

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